Thank you so much for this game!!! This is what I more or less had wished for lol (like the character creation and deciding what the MC's personality is like) and the fact that you are going to flesh out the characters makes me incredibly happy because while I adore the game and the boys, at times I found them too one-dimensional. I really look forward to play more <3
PS: A small question, are you going to implement to see whether you are choosing a romance-related response? Bcs I tend to struggle with romancing a specific LI when there is no such option lol
I'm so glad you're enjoying it!! So about romance, it's not exactly that there's "romance" and "non-romance" options, it's more like first you need to build a friendship or at least positive relationship with them by being more intimate. Later you'll have the option to pursue a certain love interest fully after Belphie is back from the attic, like essentially a separate "route" for each love interest. The options to to get closer romantically will be pretty obvious so don't worry about struggling :)
Hi there!! Thank you so much for starting on this project, I've only just gotten into the game and BOY do the dialogue options make me mad sometimes aaaaAAA but I was able to express myself more in this version!!! I am excited for the introduction of Seraphina too!!
Side note: may I ask if you would be interested in beta testers or proofreaders/editors? I'm really invested in this project and I'd like to offer my time to help out in whichever way I can!
Thank you so much for the support; glad you're enjoying! As for the topic of beta testers, we'd love to have you! Do you happen to have Discord or another platform where we can coordinate the details?
i'm honestly very excited how this will go especially with how our mc's choices impact the plot, I like how this is written but i think the conversation between the characters are going too steadfast and feels awkward? either way, it's still a pleasure to read and i can't wait for more <33
Thank you so much! Would you mind expanding on why you think the conversations feel awkward? Feedback helps improve the game so it's very much appreciated :)
When I read the dialogue, the tone of Diavolo and Lucifer feels bland when I imagine their voices— This is how I personally read it, others might disagree on it though. I can’t really feel Diavolo’s enthusiasm or Lucifer’s famous “MAMMOOOON” phrase. So it didn’t feel very impactful.
But the others’ tone and dialogue are good! I can still see how whiny Asmodeus is, how snarky Satan is, and especially Mammon’s beloved attitude <3. Of course, Beel’s abrupt interruptions are as funny as always.
The pace of the story also feels very fast so when I read throughout it doesn’t feel that impactful. I think it’s because when the MC was first dropped in Devildom, it’s too brief and I suggest a variety of reaction towards this scene would feel organic in a way as different people would express either shock or fear— The MC feels too calm and lenient that it feels sort of odd. Especially how any memories regarding MC is erased in the human world, that’d be a good opportunity for the MC to express anger or confusion towards the situation.
I can see why this wasn’t put because of how hard coding is (From first-hand experience, it gave me a headache twice LOL) and I’d understand if you don’t wanna put too many choices in!
Ironically Diavolo and Lucifer are the two whose dialogue I took straight from the game instead of changing it, haha. As for the MC being calm, I imagined it to be like at first you just kinda think you're dreaming/are in denial, if that makes sense? Once Levi tries to kill you, though, that's when the shock and realization truly hits. In all honesty it is pretty difficult to have proper reactions in the very beginning when the player's personality isn't put in, so I apologize.
Still, I appreciate your feedback a lot! The Lucifer/Diavolo and memories situation are both valid points and I'll do my best to fix it in Version 1.0 to have it seem a little more organic :)
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Thank you so much for this game!!! This is what I more or less had wished for lol (like the character creation and deciding what the MC's personality is like) and the fact that you are going to flesh out the characters makes me incredibly happy because while I adore the game and the boys, at times I found them too one-dimensional. I really look forward to play more <3
PS: A small question, are you going to implement to see whether you are choosing a romance-related response? Bcs I tend to struggle with romancing a specific LI when there is no such option lol
I'm so glad you're enjoying it!! So about romance, it's not exactly that there's "romance" and "non-romance" options, it's more like first you need to build a friendship or at least positive relationship with them by being more intimate. Later you'll have the option to pursue a certain love interest fully after Belphie is back from the attic, like essentially a separate "route" for each love interest. The options to to get closer romantically will be pretty obvious so don't worry about struggling :)
Hi there!! Thank you so much for starting on this project, I've only just gotten into the game and BOY do the dialogue options make me mad sometimes aaaaAAA but I was able to express myself more in this version!!! I am excited for the introduction of Seraphina too!!
Side note: may I ask if you would be interested in beta testers or proofreaders/editors? I'm really invested in this project and I'd like to offer my time to help out in whichever way I can!
Thank you so much for the support; glad you're enjoying! As for the topic of beta testers, we'd love to have you! Do you happen to have Discord or another platform where we can coordinate the details?
Yes I do! You can find me on Discord at eleinamazing#3991, looking forward to hearing from you soon! ^^
I've sent you a friend request!
i'm honestly very excited how this will go especially with how our mc's choices impact the plot, I like how this is written but i think the conversation between the characters are going too steadfast and feels awkward? either way, it's still a pleasure to read and i can't wait for more <33
Thank you so much! Would you mind expanding on why you think the conversations feel awkward? Feedback helps improve the game so it's very much appreciated :)
When I read the dialogue, the tone of Diavolo and Lucifer feels bland when I imagine their voices— This is how I personally read it, others might disagree on it though. I can’t really feel Diavolo’s enthusiasm or Lucifer’s famous “MAMMOOOON” phrase. So it didn’t feel very impactful.
But the others’ tone and dialogue are good! I can still see how whiny Asmodeus is, how snarky Satan is, and especially Mammon’s beloved attitude <3. Of course, Beel’s abrupt interruptions are as funny as always.
The pace of the story also feels very fast so when I read throughout it doesn’t feel that impactful. I think it’s because when the MC was first dropped in Devildom, it’s too brief and I suggest a variety of reaction towards this scene would feel organic in a way as different people would express either shock or fear— The MC feels too calm and lenient that it feels sort of odd. Especially how any memories regarding MC is erased in the human world, that’d be a good opportunity for the MC to express anger or confusion towards the situation.
I can see why this wasn’t put because of how hard coding is (From first-hand experience, it gave me a headache twice LOL) and I’d understand if you don’t wanna put too many choices in!
Ironically Diavolo and Lucifer are the two whose dialogue I took straight from the game instead of changing it, haha. As for the MC being calm, I imagined it to be like at first you just kinda think you're dreaming/are in denial, if that makes sense? Once Levi tries to kill you, though, that's when the shock and realization truly hits. In all honesty it is pretty difficult to have proper reactions in the very beginning when the player's personality isn't put in, so I apologize.
Still, I appreciate your feedback a lot! The Lucifer/Diavolo and memories situation are both valid points and I'll do my best to fix it in Version 1.0 to have it seem a little more organic :)
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This is really interesting I love It!! I can't wait for more!
Thank you, so happy to hear it! <3
I SINCERELY LOVE THIS
Thank you so much; glad you're enjoying!