Wow! I absolutely love this. Also just followed the twitter and I looked forward to any updates. I appreciate the time put into this and I am excited to play more in the future <3 Have a good day/night!
// im so sorry this turned so long lmao, hope none of you mind
oh my god this is a gem holy shit-- i more or less kinda wanted this sorta interactive fic stuff with canon divergence after chapter 16, which was what me and my friend considered an utter trainwreck in terms of what the fuck is happening and why (which is just my opinion haha, i might just be holding onto old memories of annoyance when i first went thru it. i just honestly just cant get over the fact that the demon dating sim cant let me do the haha mc now has trauma and needs copium lmao frfr n shit u-u). while all the fix-it fanfic on ao3 helped in that regard, it's nice to see some people got pretty dedicated to getting the experience we all probably hoped for in the actual game.
i honestly kinda fell off OM after everything that happened in the following seasons (and the events... god the rapid fire events you legit cant breathe it was so horrible n so tiring for me.............) but i'm still pretty into this! i even got a bit to excited and read through what was the og build and honestly not even surprised i defaulted to leaning towards mammon during all of it-- once a mammon stan, always a mammon stan apparently.......
nevertheless! i still have! many!! thoughts!!! or, well, questions lmao-- i hope its okay that im pretty much spamming this whole comment section with my rambly ass because i genuinely cant stop ( T u T )
>>> rambly question time <<<
firstly, just to get this out of the way, i love mammon with all my heart and soul since he was the literal first pick i had at the start of OM since everyone else was Unavailable and Scary till some shit happened in-game and a certain season opened up a lotta doors to closet other chara simps. BUT ALSO--
barbatos........ him..... he..... <3
so while i know it's probably a real pain in the ass to manage literally 12 charas + seraphina (oooh interested in who she is tbh-- the one seraphina ik is the whole thing with levi), i just wanted to ask if the devious little creachur butler man could be fawned over by mc cause maaan i don't understand why i love him and his stupid cut... :pensive:
another question is more so due to what i saw on the old build.
as funny as it is in my head to continue playing with my chaotic hothead of an mc who would most likely bite back at any of the brothers should she consider it justified on her end (pre-getting to know them), would this have consequences like being barred from friendships? or is the intimacy point system (which will be implemented in the future im guessing) more so just flavor text kinda stuff?
and as for the final one, this one is less question and more so just me going on to say that i'm actually pretty happy to have found this-- like, so, i used to talk to my friend about asmo and how sad we were that the poor guy got literally no proper screen time canon wise despite how interesting he seems as a character. whenever we thought he'd get some character development, its like he (and everyone else, i realize) get reset to status quo despite there having been potential for more.... ://
we kinda just decided not to expect a lot from the om storyline despite it being kinda sad to drop into the whole mindset of "why did we expect more from a dating sim/otome" just to cope lmao-- so anyway, point being, thanks for this and i hope you/your friends/your team(?) take care of yourselves throughout this project! good luck on that and your many other endeavors! <3 <3
Hi there! First of all, I just want to say thank you so, so much for your support and praise! I'm incredibly happy and flattered you're enjoying this rewrite!
I 100% agree with the whole Belphie thing; in all honesty I think the entire situation was very badly handled and then immediately brushed off. It was actually one of the major reasons I wanted to rewrite the plot alongside how everything gets rushed and boring afterwards.
Don't worry about the screentime; Barbatos and the other side characters will appear much sooner than in the original game and will be romanceable from the get-go. If you'd like to, you'll have the option to spend time with them since it's definitely understandable how the brothers aren't the best in the beginning :)
The personality in this new version will be much more detailed and organic than the og, but you'll still be able to be fiesty/hotheaded! This won't bar you from any friendships or anything; rather, it will simply change how the other characters view you and how much they like you, so it might increase or decrease the effort required to get close with certain characters.
Thank you so much for this game!!! This is what I more or less had wished for lol (like the character creation and deciding what the MC's personality is like) and the fact that you are going to flesh out the characters makes me incredibly happy because while I adore the game and the boys, at times I found them too one-dimensional. I really look forward to play more <3
PS: A small question, are you going to implement to see whether you are choosing a romance-related response? Bcs I tend to struggle with romancing a specific LI when there is no such option lol
I'm so glad you're enjoying it!! So about romance, it's not exactly that there's "romance" and "non-romance" options, it's more like first you need to build a friendship or at least positive relationship with them by being more intimate. Later you'll have the option to pursue a certain love interest fully after Belphie is back from the attic, like essentially a separate "route" for each love interest. The options to to get closer romantically will be pretty obvious so don't worry about struggling :)
Hi there!! Thank you so much for starting on this project, I've only just gotten into the game and BOY do the dialogue options make me mad sometimes aaaaAAA but I was able to express myself more in this version!!! I am excited for the introduction of Seraphina too!!
Side note: may I ask if you would be interested in beta testers or proofreaders/editors? I'm really invested in this project and I'd like to offer my time to help out in whichever way I can!
Thank you so much for the support; glad you're enjoying! As for the topic of beta testers, we'd love to have you! Do you happen to have Discord or another platform where we can coordinate the details?
i'm honestly very excited how this will go especially with how our mc's choices impact the plot, I like how this is written but i think the conversation between the characters are going too steadfast and feels awkward? either way, it's still a pleasure to read and i can't wait for more <33
Thank you so much! Would you mind expanding on why you think the conversations feel awkward? Feedback helps improve the game so it's very much appreciated :)
When I read the dialogue, the tone of Diavolo and Lucifer feels bland when I imagine their voices— This is how I personally read it, others might disagree on it though. I can’t really feel Diavolo’s enthusiasm or Lucifer’s famous “MAMMOOOON” phrase. So it didn’t feel very impactful.
But the others’ tone and dialogue are good! I can still see how whiny Asmodeus is, how snarky Satan is, and especially Mammon’s beloved attitude <3. Of course, Beel’s abrupt interruptions are as funny as always.
The pace of the story also feels very fast so when I read throughout it doesn’t feel that impactful. I think it’s because when the MC was first dropped in Devildom, it’s too brief and I suggest a variety of reaction towards this scene would feel organic in a way as different people would express either shock or fear— The MC feels too calm and lenient that it feels sort of odd. Especially how any memories regarding MC is erased in the human world, that’d be a good opportunity for the MC to express anger or confusion towards the situation.
I can see why this wasn’t put because of how hard coding is (From first-hand experience, it gave me a headache twice LOL) and I’d understand if you don’t wanna put too many choices in!
Ironically Diavolo and Lucifer are the two whose dialogue I took straight from the game instead of changing it, haha. As for the MC being calm, I imagined it to be like at first you just kinda think you're dreaming/are in denial, if that makes sense? Once Levi tries to kill you, though, that's when the shock and realization truly hits. In all honesty it is pretty difficult to have proper reactions in the very beginning when the player's personality isn't put in, so I apologize.
Still, I appreciate your feedback a lot! The Lucifer/Diavolo and memories situation are both valid points and I'll do my best to fix it in Version 1.0 to have it seem a little more organic :)
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Wow! I absolutely love this. Also just followed the twitter and I looked forward to any updates. I appreciate the time put into this and I am excited to play more in the future <3 Have a good day/night!
Thank you so much! ^^
// im so sorry this turned so long lmao, hope none of you mind
oh my god this is a gem holy shit-- i more or less kinda wanted this sorta interactive fic stuff with canon divergence after chapter 16, which was what me and my friend considered an utter trainwreck in terms of what the fuck is happening and why
(which is just my opinion haha, i might just be holding onto old memories of annoyance when i first went thru it. i just honestly just cant get over the fact that the demon dating sim cant let me do the haha mc now has trauma and needs copium lmao frfr n shit u-u). while all the fix-it fanfic on ao3 helped in that regard, it's nice to see some people got pretty dedicated to getting the experience we all probably hoped for in the actual game.i honestly kinda fell off OM after everything that happened in the following seasons (and the events... god the rapid fire events you legit cant breathe it was so horrible n so tiring for me.............) but i'm still pretty into this! i even got a bit to excited and read through what was the og build and honestly not even surprised i defaulted to leaning towards mammon during all of it-- once a mammon stan, always a mammon stan apparently.......
nevertheless! i still have! many!! thoughts!!! or, well, questions lmao-- i hope its okay that im pretty much spamming this whole comment section with my rambly ass because i genuinely cant stop ( T u T )
>>> rambly question time <<<
firstly, just to get this out of the way, i love mammon with all my heart and soul since he was the literal first pick i had at the start of OM since everyone else was Unavailable and Scary till some shit happened in-game and a certain season opened up a lotta doors to closet other chara simps. BUT ALSO--
barbatos........ him..... he..... <3
so while i know it's probably a real pain in the ass to manage literally 12 charas + seraphina (oooh interested in who she is tbh-- the one seraphina ik is the whole thing with levi), i just wanted to ask if the devious little creachur butler man could be fawned over by mc cause maaan i don't understand why i love him and his stupid cut... :pensive:
another question is more so due to what i saw on the old build.
as funny as it is in my head to continue playing with my chaotic hothead of an mc who would most likely bite back at any of the brothers should she consider it justified on her end (pre-getting to know them), would this have consequences like being barred from friendships? or is the intimacy point system (which will be implemented in the future im guessing) more so just flavor text kinda stuff?
and as for the final one, this one is less question and more so just me going on to say that i'm actually pretty happy to have found this-- like, so, i used to talk to my friend about asmo and how sad we were that the poor guy got literally no proper screen time canon wise despite how interesting he seems as a character. whenever we thought he'd get some character development, its like he (and everyone else, i realize) get reset to status quo despite there having been potential for more.... ://
we kinda just decided not to expect a lot from the om storyline despite it being kinda sad to drop into the whole mindset of "why did we expect more from a dating sim/otome" just to cope lmao-- so anyway, point being, thanks for this and i hope you/your friends/your team(?) take care of yourselves throughout this project! good luck on that and your many other endeavors! <3 <3
Hi there! First of all, I just want to say thank you so, so much for your support and praise! I'm incredibly happy and flattered you're enjoying this rewrite!
I 100% agree with the whole Belphie thing; in all honesty I think the entire situation was very badly handled and then immediately brushed off. It was actually one of the major reasons I wanted to rewrite the plot alongside how everything gets rushed and boring afterwards.
Don't worry about the screentime; Barbatos and the other side characters will appear much sooner than in the original game and will be romanceable from the get-go. If you'd like to, you'll have the option to spend time with them since it's definitely understandable how the brothers aren't the best in the beginning :)
The personality in this new version will be much more detailed and organic than the og, but you'll still be able to be fiesty/hotheaded! This won't bar you from any friendships or anything; rather, it will simply change how the other characters view you and how much they like you, so it might increase or decrease the effort required to get close with certain characters.
Once again thank you so much for your support! <3
Thank you so much for this game!!! This is what I more or less had wished for lol (like the character creation and deciding what the MC's personality is like) and the fact that you are going to flesh out the characters makes me incredibly happy because while I adore the game and the boys, at times I found them too one-dimensional. I really look forward to play more <3
PS: A small question, are you going to implement to see whether you are choosing a romance-related response? Bcs I tend to struggle with romancing a specific LI when there is no such option lol
I'm so glad you're enjoying it!! So about romance, it's not exactly that there's "romance" and "non-romance" options, it's more like first you need to build a friendship or at least positive relationship with them by being more intimate. Later you'll have the option to pursue a certain love interest fully after Belphie is back from the attic, like essentially a separate "route" for each love interest. The options to to get closer romantically will be pretty obvious so don't worry about struggling :)
Hi there!! Thank you so much for starting on this project, I've only just gotten into the game and BOY do the dialogue options make me mad sometimes aaaaAAA but I was able to express myself more in this version!!! I am excited for the introduction of Seraphina too!!
Side note: may I ask if you would be interested in beta testers or proofreaders/editors? I'm really invested in this project and I'd like to offer my time to help out in whichever way I can!
Thank you so much for the support; glad you're enjoying! As for the topic of beta testers, we'd love to have you! Do you happen to have Discord or another platform where we can coordinate the details?
Yes I do! You can find me on Discord at eleinamazing#3991, looking forward to hearing from you soon! ^^
I've sent you a friend request!
i'm honestly very excited how this will go especially with how our mc's choices impact the plot, I like how this is written but i think the conversation between the characters are going too steadfast and feels awkward? either way, it's still a pleasure to read and i can't wait for more <33
Thank you so much! Would you mind expanding on why you think the conversations feel awkward? Feedback helps improve the game so it's very much appreciated :)
When I read the dialogue, the tone of Diavolo and Lucifer feels bland when I imagine their voices— This is how I personally read it, others might disagree on it though. I can’t really feel Diavolo’s enthusiasm or Lucifer’s famous “MAMMOOOON” phrase. So it didn’t feel very impactful.
But the others’ tone and dialogue are good! I can still see how whiny Asmodeus is, how snarky Satan is, and especially Mammon’s beloved attitude <3. Of course, Beel’s abrupt interruptions are as funny as always.
The pace of the story also feels very fast so when I read throughout it doesn’t feel that impactful. I think it’s because when the MC was first dropped in Devildom, it’s too brief and I suggest a variety of reaction towards this scene would feel organic in a way as different people would express either shock or fear— The MC feels too calm and lenient that it feels sort of odd. Especially how any memories regarding MC is erased in the human world, that’d be a good opportunity for the MC to express anger or confusion towards the situation.
I can see why this wasn’t put because of how hard coding is (From first-hand experience, it gave me a headache twice LOL) and I’d understand if you don’t wanna put too many choices in!
Ironically Diavolo and Lucifer are the two whose dialogue I took straight from the game instead of changing it, haha. As for the MC being calm, I imagined it to be like at first you just kinda think you're dreaming/are in denial, if that makes sense? Once Levi tries to kill you, though, that's when the shock and realization truly hits. In all honesty it is pretty difficult to have proper reactions in the very beginning when the player's personality isn't put in, so I apologize.
Still, I appreciate your feedback a lot! The Lucifer/Diavolo and memories situation are both valid points and I'll do my best to fix it in Version 1.0 to have it seem a little more organic :)
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This is really interesting I love It!! I can't wait for more!
Thank you, so happy to hear it! <3
I SINCERELY LOVE THIS
Thank you so much; glad you're enjoying!