I like the first chapter and the many different choices but there are still some things that could be improved.
What is the reason for changing the canon pronouns of Asmodeus and Levi? It's strange because all the other brothers have he/him pronouns and these two were singled out because being a shut in/liking games/makeup/fashion is not "manly" enough I guess? Why isn't Lucifer the one with the he/she pronouns for example?
Also something to keep in mind for future chapters is to refrain from having the main LIs flirt with the other characters if you want this to be a more enjoyable otome for everyone. The LIs should only focus on the MC when it comes to romance. Maybe it could be an option in the settings.
I think this is something that the original game failed to do and it was one of the reasons for losing popularity and shutting down, unlike more successful otomes like Love and Deepspace who don't do that.
I did not change the pronouns because they are not "manly" enough. That would be ridiculous. Remember, these are only personal headcanons. I simply see Asmodeus as not particularly caring what people call him, and Levi being a demiboy - speaking as one myself.
As for your other point - there are routes planned for this rewrite as mentioned on the first page, so the harem from the og isn't going to be there. Hope that helps.
I heard this game was made on Twine and seeing how well this is made i've always wanted to make something similar using Twine, have you ever thought about releasing a tutorial or know any tutorials you personally used, this is amazing??
Thank you!! I'm happy to post tutorials if there's anything you'd like to know. The best place to ask would be Tumblr :) https://obey-me-rewrite.tumblr.com/
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I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATEEEE
I really like Obey me and I was sad that we can't cutomize your mc. So I'm happy that I discovered this game today (◍•ᴗ•◍)
So thank you (◕ᴗ◕✿)
I like the first chapter and the many different choices but there are still some things that could be improved.
What is the reason for changing the canon pronouns of Asmodeus and Levi? It's strange because all the other brothers have he/him pronouns and these two were singled out because being a shut in/liking games/makeup/fashion is not "manly" enough I guess? Why isn't Lucifer the one with the he/she pronouns for example?
Also something to keep in mind for future chapters is to refrain from having the main LIs flirt with the other characters if you want this to be a more enjoyable otome for everyone. The LIs should only focus on the MC when it comes to romance. Maybe it could be an option in the settings.
I think this is something that the original game failed to do and it was one of the reasons for losing popularity and shutting down, unlike more successful otomes like Love and Deepspace who don't do that.
I did not change the pronouns because they are not "manly" enough. That would be ridiculous. Remember, these are only personal headcanons. I simply see Asmodeus as not particularly caring what people call him, and Levi being a demiboy - speaking as one myself.
As for your other point - there are routes planned for this rewrite as mentioned on the first page, so the harem from the og isn't going to be there. Hope that helps.
I loved it so much! You did such a great job!
Thank you!!
I really loved this! It resparked my joy for obey me! I'm really excited for where you will take this story
Thank you, I'm really happy you liked it!
this was great !! can't wait for more updates !<333
Thank you!
I heard this game was made on Twine and seeing how well this is made i've always wanted to make something similar using Twine, have you ever thought about releasing a tutorial or know any tutorials you personally used, this is amazing??
Thank you!! I'm happy to post tutorials if there's anything you'd like to know. The best place to ask would be Tumblr :) https://obey-me-rewrite.tumblr.com/