I like the first chapter and the many different choices but there are still some things that could be improved.
What is the reason for changing the canon pronouns of Asmodeus and Levi? It's strange because all the other brothers have he/him pronouns and these two were singled out because being a shut in/liking games/makeup/fashion is not "manly" enough I guess? Why isn't Lucifer the one with the he/she pronouns for example?
Also something to keep in mind for future chapters is to refrain from having the main LIs flirt with the other characters if you want this to be a more enjoyable otome for everyone. The LIs should only focus on the MC when it comes to romance. Maybe it could be an option in the settings.
I think this is something that the original game failed to do and it was one of the reasons for losing popularity and shutting down, unlike more successful otomes like Love and Deepspace who don't do that.
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I like the first chapter and the many different choices but there are still some things that could be improved.
What is the reason for changing the canon pronouns of Asmodeus and Levi? It's strange because all the other brothers have he/him pronouns and these two were singled out because being a shut in/liking games/makeup/fashion is not "manly" enough I guess? Why isn't Lucifer the one with the he/she pronouns for example?
Also something to keep in mind for future chapters is to refrain from having the main LIs flirt with the other characters if you want this to be a more enjoyable otome for everyone. The LIs should only focus on the MC when it comes to romance. Maybe it could be an option in the settings.
I think this is something that the original game failed to do and it was one of the reasons for losing popularity and shutting down, unlike more successful otomes like Love and Deepspace who don't do that.
I loved it so much! You did such a great job!